Tuesday, July 12, 2011
Help me check any grammatical errors regarding my sentences?
After composing myself, I began dearly cherishing my ex-boyfriend. We first met on the night of 6th May, 2008. We went for a long walk together that night until my legs refused to carry me further. He offered to give me a piggyback. We hugged and kissed under the shade of a tree. His lips felt very soft. It was late into the night by that time and I thought about going home. Instead, I felt myself unable to leave him which led to both of us staying at a hotel. He did not make love with me. He was a boy who knew my feelings and respected me. I am not sure whether I can meet a boy better than him in the future. However, I know for sure that he is my most loved person besides my mother.
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